Dive now, work later
Sasi (63 points) | Mon, 2005-04-18 17:48
In school we got the task to create t-shirt, motto: Dive now, work later. These are two variations from the three, but right at the moment i am working on the third one. I am curious what you think about it. The teacher liked them so far.
I like the first one, but with a simpler computer, but same character. Also, I would make the whole artwork much smaller, so that it's only in the middle of the t-shirt. It's gonna be easier to read and neater.
I like the yellow one as well. I like the O sinking. The "dive later" could be on the back just below the neck rather than under the wave.
I love laptops, that's why the laptop is too detailed. But i can agree maybe ;]
I just did not want to put the artwork in the middle, cause the teacher told us not to pruduce an illustration in a box, we should use the whole t-shirt. And the typo is a bit of a chaos typo. It is readable in a t-shirt size, it just disappears when so small. I was making it similar to CCS code, cause i associated on CSS things in this version.
In the one the O is sinking; i dunno why i did not use up the back of the tshirt, not a bad idea, maybe i'll do it.
I really don't like the yellow one. I just don't like the colors together.
How about a more hip font. Something without serif that would give you a teenage sensation from the 21st century and not from a few hundred years ago? I really love the idea of the O in the water.
Also, not sure if you are making them unisex, but if you are making one for "her" and idea might be to wave the water downwards right below the breast line giving the impression for bigger breasts for the women. You know what I mean, kinda creating an optical illusion in the size... Girls love buying shirts like that, and us guys seem to enjoy looking at them. ;)
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the drawing is too big and draws attention away from the motto. The laptop is also too detailed for my taste.