origami

better. but its kind of sloppy looking origami. the other tree was more elegant
and now i lose ori in the tree.

are we really going to do this again?
4 or 5 progresslive variations of basically the same "design" which is really just dropping type on a photo?

Why are your leaves brown?

In 10 years of trying to do origami, having a general interest in paper arts and other things, you may capture peoples attention by having a concept surrounding a cute animal or a crane, one of the first advanced folds anyone who does origami learns. Origami trees aren't very popular. What is your concept here anyways aside from trying to incorporate origami into whatever object? Yes, that's what it is essentially, but what would make me learn it? Think this over, do some research before posting another concept that I just mentioned.

Graphic Design is about caring about your audience and trying to cater your message directly to them so that your idea penetrates past their apathy for visual clutter and makes them want to read and even better, act on what they're reading.

PS: Who, what, when, where and how? All you've shown us is a probable sponsor logo of the "event" and a title, no time or place- no other information, what it costs if anything, what you need to bring. Come on man.

I feel sad.

it's not cute, not beautiful.

maybe some lack of one of origami concept foundation: precision.

Yes - agree with the others. The brush stroke backdrop are the opposite of origami which is clean, neat and very precise. The tree - although an origami piece - does not speak to the subject very well (and the colors are super saturated too). You can have a lot of fun with this - let's see it.