Vespa Scooter Ad 1
andrei (59 points) | Fri, 2006-05-12 06:47
this is a comprehensive layout for the school assignment on the "vespa scooters" advertisement compaign,
a magazine ad, full bleed.
unfortunately you can't copywrite a concept, i hope i'm not going to get ripped off ;)
link to a better quality image: http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/462/vespasuperman4co.jpg
for those of you who "don't get it": google -> superman, flying ;)
*all the images used are the property of their owners and copywrite holders.
I like your ads, however I think in the real world you would have a hard time getting permission to use those characters. EDIT: or are those images already in use by Vespa?
The word "everyday" does not have enough size contrast, but I don't think it should have any. If you must emphasize it, then maybe use italics. A period at the end of the sentence would be nice too.
I would also remove the shadow from the text. I don't think it's really working, plus the perspective doesn't match up with the other shadows.
I like the ads. Good work.
I like it, but the Vespa logo at the top is hard to see. And is it me, or does Superman's left foot look odd? He's standing awkwardly.
I think the concept is great, however, I think the location and size of the Vespa Logo is a little off. I'd try playing with the size a little bit. The scooter itself is an 'icon' I don't know if the logo needs to be as huge as it is. But great job, and great idea!